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Monday, October 31, 2011
Kinky philosophy
"There are no good lawyers. There maybe lady wrestlers and Catholic universities. There maybe military intelligence. But a good lawyer is a contradiction in terms. When you needed one, you needed one, however, and I needed one."
"Some people wake to the sound of church bells. Some people wake to the sound of birds. But in New York City you wake to the sound of garbage trucks. Place is still filthy, of course. Can't have everything."
"Rain was a lot like vomiting. One of the few great equalisers in life. It soaked society dames and bag ladies. People and pigeons. Cops and robbers."
"Of course, most people didn't know what they were missing. And they sure didn't know what they weren't missing. Nor did they know that there was any difference between the two."
"Rather grudinglythe guy called the city editor, and before you could have cooked a two minute egg, the waves were parting, the wheels were turning, the metaphors were mixing, and the two of us were shaking hands with Virgil and following him down into the circles of Hell."
Sunday, October 30, 2011
Lazy Sunday Service
My posts this week:
Six to choose from ...
Review of The Savage Altar by Asa Larsson
Activity status of unfinished estates 2011
Intense, urgent and a little explosive
Review of The Bloody Meadow by William Ryan
You'd Better Sit Down
Saturday, October 29, 2011
You'd better sit down
Kenny dropped into an armchair. 'I take it this is bad news.'
'It depends on how you look at it.'
'Bad then. Go on.'
'I'm pregnant.'
'You're ... how the hell did that happen?'
'How do you think?'
'But you're forty five!'
'And still fertile. And so are you. Two bottles of wine and no protection and ...'
'Jesus.'
'Is that all you've got to say? Jesus?'
'What do you want me to say?'
'I don't know? That you're over the moon. That it'll be okay.'
'I ... a baby ... Jesus.'
A drabble is a story of exactly 100 words.
Friday, October 28, 2011
Review of The Bloody Meadow by William Ryan (Mantle, 2011)
I thoroughly enjoyed Ryan debut novel, The Holy Thief, so I had high expectations for The Bloody Meadow. It's a good read, but doesn't quite match the quality of the first book in the series. The Holy Thief had a claustrophobic and tense atmosphere, with a very tight plot. The Bloody Meadow is more expansive, felt a little looser in the plotting, and Korolov as a character is little developed in terms of backstory and personal life. And because there is a lot going on and there is a big cast, the development of characters in general is a little bit too much surface and not enough depth. There are also some unlikely coincidences, which enable a couple of characters from the first book to appear in the second. That all said, the book does have historical richness and The Bloody Meadow is an enjoyable read, and if I hadn't read the first book I'm sure this review would read more positively than it might seem. To be clear then, I am still recommending it as worthy of a look and my sense is that this is a series with a lot of potential. Personally, I hope the third book is set back in Moscow, allowing a further engagement with the militia and pathology characters from the first book. Regardless of setting, I plan to read it.
Wednesday, October 26, 2011
Intense, urgent and a little explosive ...
Tuesday, October 25, 2011
Review of The Savage Altar by Asa Larsson (Penguin, 2005)
The Savage Altar is the first novel by Asa Larsson and won Sweden's best first crime novel award. The book has a police procedural feel to, and it does have that side to it, but it primarily focuses on Martinsson's efforts without ever really straying into legal thriller territory. Rebecka Martinsson is a feisty character, and is easy to identify with. Indeed, the characterisation throughout the book is strong, with a good range of supporting cast and I felt the pregnant cop had a lot of potential to front her own series. The story also has a good sense of place, transporting the reader to the frozen landscape of northern Sweden. One feature of the storytelling I particularly liked was the change in perspective between characters, which could alter mid-scene as one character left. The story itself was relatively straightforward. The plot was nicely constructed, though it has no real twists (which was fine by me), andits tension points were a little flat because they were well telegraphed. Overall, a solid start to a series, which I intend to follow based on this outing.
Monday, October 24, 2011
Six to choose from ...
A Death in Summer by Benjamin Black
Absolute Zero Cool by Declan Burke
The Reckoning by Jane Casey
Bloodland by Alan Glynn
Taboo by Casey Hill
The Bloody Meadow by William Ryan
You can vote for your favourite book by clicking on the image above. I've only read Absolute Zero Cool and Bloodland, so far. I've made a start on The Bloody Meadow. I'm a little surprised that Gene Kerrigan's The Rage didn't make the shortlist, but as Declan Burke notes over on Crime Always Pays, 2011 was a bumper year of quality Irish crime fiction.
Sunday, October 23, 2011
Lazy Sunday Service
My posts this week:
Review of Nazi on the Run by Gerald Steinacher
The El up Ninth Avenue
Some of the dark stuff
Two gritty takes on justice
Review of Garnethill by Denise Mina
Unfinished estates 2010-2011 change
I know you're not the answer
Saturday, October 22, 2011
I know you’re not the answer
I know you’re not the answer,
Black and blue, forty different hues,
Oh love, oh god, oh ...
Black nights, grey mornings,
Walking into doors and falling,
Clutching, weeping, tight false smiles,
Life is more than little white lies.
That’s the hope at least,
As I know you’re not the answer.
How can you be the answer?
Oh love, oh god, oh ...
Heaven help the fool,
Who looks in the mirror,
And self-deludes,
Who frets and forgets and fails to regret.
Mostly.
I know you’re not the answer.
I’ll never have an answer.
A drabble is a story of exactly 100 words.
Friday, October 21, 2011
Review of Garnethill by Denise Mina (Bantam, 1998)
I had mixed feelings about Garnethill. Mina is clearly a skilled writer and the story is well plotted, with some nice twists and tension points, and is particularly strong on characterization. It also has a nice sense of place and contextualisation with respect to incest, abuse, family feuds, friendship and mental health issues. The full complexity of Maureen as a character shines through. My problem was with Maureen, however. If there is a difficult path, she seems to take it. The story is set up so that you’re meant to feel sympathy and empathy for her in opposition to the characters that oppose her, in particular her mother and Joe McEwan, the policeman in charge of the investigation into Douglas’ death. My problem was that I often identified with McEwan more than Maureen, especially as the book progressed. In her obsession to exact a retributive justice, she actively misleads the police and brings people into real danger and harm, including herself. And the end is quite callous in many ways as she rejects someone she’s being trying to protect. It might be realistic in many ways, but I found it a little frustrating and tiring. Overall then, a book that has a lot of pluses, but which didn’t resonate with me personally as much as I hoped it might.
Thursday, October 20, 2011
Two gritty takes on justice
Patti's collection of 23 stories is Monkey Justice and is published by Snubnose Press. It's been praised thus:
"Patricia Abbott proves that there are many shades of noir as she expertly layers her stories with melancholy, loss and the frailness of the human psyche" – Dave Zeltserman
“In this collection of short contemporary noir fiction, Patti Abbott distinguishes herself as an extraordinary storyteller of the dark recesses of the human heart. Abbott’s characters hit hard, fight dirty, and seek a brand of hardscrabble justice that will leave you both wincing and wishing for more.” – Sophie Littlefield
Paul's nine story collection is Brit Grit and is published by Trestle Press. Reviews run thus:
Brit Grit gives you a meaty, informative introduction to the genre followed by nine terrific fast-paced stories populated for the most part by stoned, drunken, thieving losers. The absurdities of everyday life are meat and drink to PDB, and his observations and characters are in turn sad, poignant, greedy, wicked, ridiculous and funny - Julie Lewthwaite
'Brazill's knack for mining life's absurd moments ... is on full display here, as is his razor sharp dialogue' - Death by Killing
'Paul Brazill's writing is a wonderful mix of gritty urban noir stylings, superb dialogue and wonderful one-liners' - Gone Bad
Both have nothing but five star reviews on Amazon UK and US. If you like the short story form, worth checking out.
Wednesday, October 19, 2011
Some of the dark stuff ...
The Point
Small time crook Paul Morgan is a bad influence on his brother, Brian. When Paul crosses one thug too many, the cider-fuelled duo flee Belfast for Warrenpoint, the sleepy seaside resort of their childhood memories. For Brian, a new life in the Point means going straight and falling in love with Rachel, while Paul graduates to carjacking by unusual means and ‘borrowing’ firearms from his new boss. Brian can’t help being dragged into his brother’s bungling schemes but Rachel can be violently persuasive herself . . . and she isn’t the only one who wants to see an end to Paul’s criminal career.
Smoke
People from Tranent aren’t called ‘the Belters’ for nothing. It didn’t take Carlo Salvino long to find that out the first time around and, now he’s out of the hospital, he’s all set for revenge. The Ramsay brothers, on the other hand, are keen to rise up in the world and get the hell out of town. They gather all their hopes in the one basket, ‘The Scottish Open’ dog-fighting tournament. In Leo they have the dog to win it, now all they need is a fair wind. The Hooks, well they’re just a maladjusted family caught up in the middle of it all. A tale of justice, injustice and misunderstanding.
As the last line of Nigel's blurb on Amazon says: Belts on and hold on to those hats.
Tuesday, October 18, 2011
The El up 9th Avenue
The picture my story relates to is "Why not use the L" (1930) which is held in the Whitney Museum of American Art in New York.
All the other stories are listed over on Patti's site, with some great contributors. Check them out.
Marian folded over The New York Post and peeked round the corner, swaying with the rhythm of the railcar. ‘How you doing, sugar?’
‘What?’ Elsie turned her head, her eyes blinking behind round glasses like a mole trying to adapt to sunlight. She’d been staring out the grimy window opposite. Perched thirty feet up on a steel frame, as the train passed the side streets she could catch glimpses of the dark waters of the Hudson River speckled with reflecting, fractured lights, and the flat expanse of New Jersey.
‘Are you doing okay, petal?’
Elsie nodded her head shyly, trying to block out the acrid, cloying smell of the bum next to her. Or perhaps he worked a manual job; something that built up a heat. Maybe he laboured at the docks or one of the waterfront factories. Regardless, his thick woollen coat was stained with oil and god knows what and reeked of wet dog and cheap liquor.
‘You want to take in a movie?’ Marian asked. ‘There’s a Gary Cooper talkie at Loew’s. Morocco. A romance about a legionnaire and a cabaret singer who meet in the desert. The canary’s that blond kraut with the bedroom eyes.’ Marian tapped the advert in the paper with a manicured nail. ‘Marlene Dietrich.’
‘I ... I’m not so taken with Gary Cooper,’ Elsie admitted.
The bum snorted a laugh without opening his eyes. ‘Honey, all you white broads love Gary Cooper.’
Elsie looked at Marian, but her companion’s amused smile offered little support.
‘Well ... well, I don’t.’ She preferred Clark Gable. He seemed more ... dashing.
‘Maybe you need to get those glasses checked, lady?’
‘And maybe you’d better mind your own business.’ She couldn’t quite believe she’d said it. Six months previously, when they’d first moved to the city seeking work and a little adventure, she wouldn’t have said boo to a goose. Marian had instantly slid into the bustle, noise, dirt and language of the city. Elsie still felt like she was living in an alien world.
The bum opened one eye, stared at her for a second, then closed it again.
‘Forget the movie palace, sisters,’ he mumbled. ‘The only place to be is Connie’s up on Seventh and 131st.’
The train pulled to a halt, passengers stepping out onto the platform.
Marian took a seat opposite Elsie. ‘That’s up in Harlem,’ she said.
‘Uh-huh.’ His eyes were still closed, his oversized cap pulled down low.
The train set off again, rocking and clunking to a rising beat.
‘Connie’s is a theater?’
‘Jazz club, honey. Satchmo hisself will be playing there tonight.’
‘Satchmo?’
‘Louie.’
‘Louie?’
‘Where you been at, Sister? Louie Armstrong. The top cat. Everyone knows Pops.’
‘It’s a ... black club?’
‘Only on the stage. White only out front. You’d fit right in, like snowflakes at the North Pole.’
‘So how do you know about it, if it’s a white’s only joint?’
‘I’s the best axe man from here to Chicago, kitten. Play there off and on.’
‘You’re in a band?’
‘Well ... I’ve played with them all. Fats, Duke, Ella, Cab, Dizzy. I set their rhythm rocking.’
The women stared across at one another, trying to decide if the bum was telling the truth.
‘I’s just ... I’s just between bands right now,’ he continued. ‘But I’ll be playing with Pops tonight. Pops always done right by Paws Jackson.’
‘Paws?’
He held up his massive hands, their palms pale, the fingertips calloused. He cracked open an eye to watch their reaction.
Marian’s eyes widened. She’d never seen fingers so thick and long. They were like something you’d see in a comic. Like giant octopi.
‘I could help get you muffins in, if you wanted. I know the doorman pretty good. He lets me store my fresh togs there, so I can make a bee-line straight from the front line.’
‘I ... I don’t ... I don’t think so,’ Elsie said, unable to believe that the ruffled man next to them was anything more than a bum or labourer; that they were even talking to him.
‘We’d need to get changed; if we’re going on the hop,’ Marian said.
‘Marian!’
‘You ladies look just fine. Workin’ girls are always welcome at Connie’s.’
‘We ain’t no working girls, Mister,’ Elsie said.
‘Sure you ain’t. I never said you were.’ Paws pulled a sly grin, closing his eyes again.
The train started to slow to a halt. Elsie rose to her feet and shuffled to the door, unable to hide her relief. ‘This is our stop, Marian.’
‘How about we head up to Harlem,’ her friend replied, not moving, ‘listen to some jazz?’
‘I don’t ... I don’t know.’ The Gary Cooper movie now sounded swell. They could watch the feature, grab a coffee and a bite to eat in Sammy’s before heading back to their cramped apartment.
‘You need to live a little, Sister,’ Paws said. ‘Let your hair down. Nobody going to put the drop on you less you want them to.’
‘I ...’
The train lurched, pulling out of the station, gaining speed.
Paws cracked open one eye and laughed. He could already feel the bass pounding, Pops’ trumpet blasting over the top, hitting sugary high notes.
There’d be some sweet music tonight.
Some info on Connie's Inn, Harlem (1923-33) can be found here.
A useful site for 1930s American slang can be found here.
Monday, October 17, 2011
Review of Nazis on the Run: How Hitler’s Henchmen Fled Justice by Gerald Steinacher (Oxford University Press, 2011)
Steinacher creates a convincing weight of evidence from documentary sources to back-up his story, however, the story itself leaves a lot to be desired. The book is marketed as a popular history tome, but it is academic in its presentation and writing style. The result is rather dry and stogy. Even then, the analysis is rather descriptive in nature, detailing lots of information and anecdotal stories, but really fails to shift to explanation or a wider discussion of what the analysis means for how we interpret what happened. The conclusion starts to do this, but is relatively short and underdeveloped. More problematically, the book could have done with a really good edit to sort out issues of repetition and poor structuring. Given the high standards of OUP, I was quite surprised that this basic editorial work had not been undertaken. The level of repetition in particular is very noticeable. With a decent edit, about a twenty percent reduction in length, and the addition of some explanation, this would have been a first class book. As it is, whilst the research work seems sound, it just about passes muster.
Sunday, October 16, 2011
Lazy Sunday Service
My posts this week
Review of The Holy Thief by William Ryan
The bloody meadow
Call for crime fiction short stories
Unfinished housing estates 2011 update
Review of Open Season by CJ Box
Can't live without shoes
Saturday, October 15, 2011
Can't live without shoes
‘Shoes.’
‘Shoes?’
‘They were on special offer. Thirty percent off.’
‘But you bought three pairs.’
‘They were a bargain.’ She turns away.
‘You have a closet full of feckin’ shoes, Gemma,’ he says, trailing after her. ‘You don’t need any more shoes!’
‘I like shoes!’
‘You’ll have to return them. Have you any idea how much trouble we’re in? The three credit cards are maxed out and you’re buying shoes!’
‘They were a bargain!’
‘They’re just more debt!’
‘I like shoes.’
He leaves. It’s that or he’ll stab her with a stiletto.
A drabble is a story of exactly 100 words.
Friday, October 14, 2011
Review of Open Season by CJ Box (2001, Corvus)
It took me a little while to get into Open Season. Box writes in short, often flat sentences, and the beginning is spent largely developing the characters and family relations. Gradually the story opens up and the prose becomes a bit more expressive. The strength of Open Season is the sense of place, contextualisation and the plotting. Box does a good job of placing the reader in the mountain and small town landscape of Wyoming, and in framing the work of game wardens and the social politics concerning their work. The plot develops nicely, the tension slowly ratcheting up. It’s clear from quite a long way out that what is going on and who the bad guys are, and that Pickett will ultimately win out, but it matters little; the reader is still kept on the edge of their seat. The characterization is well done, especially with regards to Pickett’s family. Overall, Open Season puts in place a very solid foundation for the rest of the series.
Thursday, October 13, 2011
Call for crime fiction short stories
"Murder around the world. Is a body lying on the floor with a knife jutting rudely out of the victim's chest the same kind of murder in Calcutta, India as it would be, say . . . . in Oslo, Norway? Are the motives of a villain in Yokohama, Japan the same as might be found in Stuttgart, Germany? The art of the mystery/detective story found around the world; a treasure chest of delicious whodunits."
The call is open to novices as well as established authors. Closing date for the first round of submissions is Nov. 12, 2011. The next round cutoff is Dec 1, 2011. First come first served. Email stories to gelati.giovanni@gmail.com.
Also a reminder: Patti, over at Pattinase, is hosting a flash fiction challenge. The task is to write a short story of less than 1,000 words inspired by the art of Reginald Marsh. Stories to be posted up by October 18th and the link sent to Patti so she can collate them.
Wednesday, October 12, 2011
The Bloody Meadow
Following his investigations in The Holy Thief, which implicated those at the very top of authority in Soviet Russia, Captain Alexei Korolev finds himself decorated and hailed as an example to all Soviet workers. But Korolev lives in an uneasy peace – his new-found knowledge is dangerous, and if it is discovered what his real actions were during the case, he will face deportation to the frozen camps of the far north.
But when the knock on the door comes, in the dead of night, it is not Siberia Korolev is destined for. Instead, Colonel Rodinov of the NKVD security service asks the detective to look into the suspected suicide of a young woman: Maria Alexandovna Lenskaya, a model citizen. Korolev is unnerved to learn that Lenskaya had been of interest to Ezhov, the feared Commissar for State Security. Ezhov himself wants to matter looked into.
And when the detective arrives on the set for Bloody Meadow, in the bleak, battle-scarred Ukraine, he soon discovers that there is more to Lenskaya's death than meets the eye.
If the book is of the same quality as the The Holy Thief, then I think Ryan will be onto a winning series. A kind of Bernie Gunther series set in Russia during roughly the same period.
Tuesday, October 11, 2011
The Holy Thief by William Ryan (Mantle, 2010)
I thoroughly enjoyed The Holy Thief, which is a very assured debut novel. It skillfully weaves together a police procedural with the understated elements of a spy thriller a la Le Carre. The characterization is well developed and Korolev is sympathetically portrayed with an interesting back story and enough depth to sustain a series. Where the book excels is in the contextual framing of politics and social relations of Stalin’s Russia – the cliques and factions, the collectivization, the role of the state, the division of power and resources, the social conditions and the everyday drudge of making ends meet – and in the strong sense of place and claustrophobic atmosphere. The plot is carefully constructed and well paced, with sufficient twists and turns and tension points. Once I’ve got hold of the second book in the series, The Bloody Meadow, it’ll move to the top of my reading pile.
Sunday, October 9, 2011
Lazy Sunday Service
My posts this week
In loving memory
September reviews
Review of Half Blood Blues by Esi Edugyan
NAMA and debt forgiveness
Review of Death Toll by Jim Kelly
The Song of the Sea
Saturday, October 8, 2011
The Song of the Sea
A drabble is a story of exactly 100 words.
Friday, October 7, 2011
Review of Death Toll by Jim Kelly (Penguin, 2011)
Death Toll is a solid police procedural. Kelly skillfully weaves the two cases around and through each other as Shaw and Valentine struggle to keep on top of both cases. The plotting is carefully constructed and paced. The characterization is nicely realized, and although I didn’t really take to either Shaw or Valentine that didn’t seem to matter. There is a very strong sense of place, Kelly dropping the reader into the landscape of Kings Lynn and the Norfolk coast. The prose is quite workmanlike, but has flourishes of nice, colourful imagery. My main critique is that sometimes the storytelling is over-elaborated, with passages that added little to the story, and the text would, I feel, have benefitted from some trimming to increase the pace and tension. Overall, a well constructed police procedural.
Wednesday, October 5, 2011
Review of Half Blood Blues by Esi Edugyan (Serpent’s Tail, 2011)
I was hooked on Half Blood Blues from the first paragraph. The book has all the ingredients I like in a novel - a strong story, well penned characters, a good sense of place and atmosphere, lovely prose, and a sensitive embedding in historical context. This is a book that is very much about Sid and his relationship with his friends; the war setting provides a backdrop and the situation of black people in Berlin and Paris forms an important context, but it frames the story rather than being the story (some reviews of the book do, in my view, unfairly critique the story on these grounds, suggesting that those interested in finding out more about black people in Germany look at other non-fiction books). The characterization and the social relations between the principals - the love, jealousy and tension - is the standout quality of the book. At the heart of the story are the themes of friendship, betrayal, guilt and forgiveness and these are skillfully woven through each other, providing the threads that tie the two time periods together. The prose is rich and colourful, and a real joy to read. One of my books of the year so far.
Tuesday, October 4, 2011
September reviews
White Sky, Black Ice by Nathan Jones ****.5
The Crossing Places by Elly Griffiths ****
The Quarry by Johan Theorin ***.5
The Cleanup by Sean Doolittle ***.5
Frozen Out by Quentin Bates **.5
Bloodland by Alan Glynn ****
The City, The City by China Mieville ***.5
Every Shallow Cut by Tom Piccirilli ***
Monday, October 3, 2011
In loving memory ...
Sunday, October 2, 2011
Lazy Sunday Service
'His eyes were green too, bright and youthful, but his skin had all the surface tension of a week-old party balloon.'
'The smile on the barman's face fell like a calving iceberg.'
My posts this week:
White lips / Pale face /Breathing in snow flakes
Review of The City, The City by China Mieville
Reginald Marsh art, flash fiction challenge
Review of Every Shallow Cut by Tom Piccirilli
Half blood blues ...
This isn't a game
Saturday, October 1, 2011
This isn’t a game
Gavin ignores the request. It’s like he’s playing on his XBox, his gaze fixed twenty metres ahead, the car an extension of himself.
They hurtle round a corner on a perfect line, the g-force tilting them in their seats.
‘Gavin!’ This isn’t a game to Chloe, it’s a rollercoaster ride and she’s scared.
‘Relax. I know this road like the back of my hand.’
They crest a hill, the wheels leaving the slick road.
An over-sized truck fills the windscreen.
Chloe screams, Gavin instinctively turns hard left, hitting the brakes.
The car smacks into a wall and cartwheels.
A drabble is a story of exactly 100 words.