‘It’s the air.’
‘What about it?’
‘It reminds me of home. It’s damp and fresh, with a hint of salt, loam, smoke and gorse. Like an autumn evening.’
‘Like a battlefield in Normandy. All I can smell is fear.’
‘I’m not talking about smell. It’s more elemental. It’s the actual air. The stuff we breathe. Move through. That swirls around us. The atmosphere that creates a certain atmosphere.’
‘You should write a poem.’
‘I’m not trying to be a poet. I’m telling you why this place seems familiar.’
‘Well, we’re not used to lying in a foxholes in Huddlesfield, Jonesy.’
A drabble is a story of exactly 100 words.
1 comment:
I like that perspective on familiarity, Rob. Great context too.
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