McFarlane jumped the ditch, scrabbling up the steep bank, clutching at sodden grass and weeds. A fence topped with barbed wire skirted the crest. He clambered over, snagging his filthy jeans, then set off at a canter across a broad field towards a gateway and the road beyond. Headlights danced along the hedgerow. He dropped to the sticky soil, heart thumping like a bass drum. The car disappeared, fading to a low hum, then silence. He savoured the moment, then rose and set off again, trotting through the crop. He’d made it. Freedom.
Behind him a siren started to wail.
A drabble is a story of exactly 100 words
3 comments:
Oh, nicely done, Rob! I like the way you evoke the fear as he's escaping.
'Tentatively' doesn't sound quite right.
You're right. I've tweaked it slightly. Thanks.
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